Love the hands, still not keen on the faces and the octopus is sooooo cute!! I think that with faces there is a bit of a repetition as it is both said in logo and in an image with no other twist. I think it needs it to add some depth, and also the faces are still quite crude in the way they are drawn. What appeals to me is the hands as it is human and also shows the next step after face to face which is a hello grip. The only worry i have with the octopus is that it looks very shelfish and my immediate connotation is from a geography or cooking. But if you would carry that idea through all the cards that would read better i guess. nx
I like the octopus and fish but I can't decide if it's almost too random. I get that they are "face to face" but that may be lost on some people.
I really like the faces. I think if the logo was placed in between them or if 'face to face' was written out in between them it would come across as a throw back to the old Sesame St (or Electric Co??) bit and would be a good conversation starter for people in our age group.
The hands look great as well. As do the coffee mugs. They definitely help to push your concept to the next step.
Love the hands, still not keen on the faces and the octopus is sooooo cute!! I think that with faces there is a bit of a repetition as it is both said in logo and in an image with no other twist. I think it needs it to add some depth, and also the faces are still quite crude in the way they are drawn. What appeals to me is the hands as it is human and also shows the next step after face to face which is a hello grip. The only worry i have with the octopus is that it looks very shelfish and my immediate connotation is from a geography or cooking. But if you would carry that idea through all the cards that would read better i guess. nx
ReplyDeleteI like the octopus and fish but I can't decide if it's almost too random. I get that they are "face to face" but that may be lost on some people.
ReplyDeleteI really like the faces. I think if the logo was placed in between them or if 'face to face' was written out in between them it would come across as a throw back to the old Sesame St (or Electric Co??) bit and would be a good conversation starter for people in our age group.
The hands look great as well. As do the coffee mugs. They definitely help to push your concept to the next step.